New game: Change that lyric Name a song and remake...

Discussion in 'Chit Chat' started by fight4acure, Mar 28, 2008.

  1. fight4acure

    fight4acure Member

    Think of a good song. Then remake the lyrics to fit your situation. This is for stress relief.

    I'll start:

    "Every breath you take" by Police.

    First post the song. Then your remake.

    Every breath you take
    Every move you make
    Every bond you break
    Every step you take
    Ill be watching you

    Every single day
    Every word you say
    Every game you play
    Every night you stay
    Ill be watching you

    Oh, cant you see
    You belong to me
    How my poor heart aches
    With every step you take

    Every move you make
    Every vow you break
    Every smile you fake
    Every claim you stake
    Ill be watching you

    Since youve gone I been lost without a trace
    I dream at night I can only see your face
    I look around but its you I cant replace
    I feel so cold and I long for your embrace
    I keep crying baby, baby, please...

    Oh, cant you see
    You belong to me
    How my poor heart aches
    With every breath you take

    Every move you make
    Every vow you break
    Every smile you fake
    Every claim you stake
    Ill be watching you

    Every move you make
    Every step you take
    Ill be watching you

    Ill be watching you
    Ill be watching you
    Ill be watching you
    Ill be watching you...

    Remake:

    Every breath I make
    Every move I make
    Every bone I break
    Every step I take
    I'll be feeling it.

    Every single day
    Every word I say
    Every game I play
    Every night and day
    I'll be feeling it.

    Oh, can't you see
    I'm in misery
    How my poor body aches
    With every step I take.

    Every move I make
    Every strain I take
    Every smile I fake
    Every stab and stake.
    I'll be feeling it.

    Since this illness I've not walked with grace.
    I dream at night yet I can only dance in place.
    I look around and see others without any pain.
    I feel so old and long for yesterday.
    I keep crying for relief, relief... please....

    Every move I make
    Every strain I take
    Every smile I fake
    Every stab and stake.
    I'll be feeling it.

    Every move I make
    Every step I take
    I'll be feeling it.

    I'll be feeling it.
    I'll be feeling it.
    I'll be feeling it.
    I'll be feeling it.

    Fight
  2. laceymae

    laceymae New Member

    I can feel your pain...

    brain won't work right now but I'm anxious to see what some of our witty friends can come up with.

    lacey
  3. kjade

    kjade New Member

    I read your song, and you are very creative, I must say! I wish I could come up with something like you did - that was cool.

    It was sad too, cause it does explain our pain so well. We need to call Sting and tell him about OUR new version! That was very well written!

    I can't come up with anything right now, but I will think about it and see if I can be so creative.
  4. rockgor

    rockgor Well-Known Member

    What kind of ghoul am I
    Who never felt a shove?
    It seem that I'm the only one
    Who cannot find his glove.

    What kind of goof is this?
    Who's got my bell?
    I'm very much afraid
    My cellphone is not well.

    What kind of wretch am I?
    There's all this strife.
    Why can't I jump the fence and find
    my wrench
    Take back my life?

    Why can't I go to town
    Let London Bridge fall down?
    And maybe then I'll know
    Am I at heart a clown?!


    From Stop the World, I want to get Off. I tried to post the original lyrics side by side, but the combination was too wide to cut and paste.



    Rock



  5. Cromwell

    Cromwell New Member

    ....check it out babe as Randy would say...

    Very good. Rock your lyrics originals were anthony newly "What kind of fool am I" I recall that

    I have no idea except maybe just titles would work for some less creative here? Like the "I Remember Me" instead of "I remember you"

    Hi Fight long time no see (no puter for 8 mths or so for me)

    Love Annie
  6. fight4acure

    fight4acure Member

    Nice ones so far, thanks all!

    Listen To Your Pain

    I know there's something going on inside
    I can see it from the pain in your eyes, yeah
    You've built a tollerance for all of your pain
    But don't let the suffering go in vain.

    Listen to your pain
    when it's making you hurt
    listen to your pain
    there's so much you can do
    Fire your doctor
    and get someone new
    But listen to your pain
    before you let them get to you

    Sometimes you wonder if this fight is worth it
    you try so hard, you try not to quit
    Your body's aching oh so bad
    You're so confused, yet so mad

    Listen to your pain
    when it's making you hurt
    listen to your pain
    there's so much you can do
    Fire your doctor
    and get someone new
    But listen to your pain
    before you let them get to you...

    and there is pain
    that needs to be heard
    so much to mention
    and the docs are absurd
    they don't always listen
    to our suffering and pain
    get another doc until it goes away

    Listen to your pain
    when it's making you hurt
    listen to your pain
    there's so much you can do
    Fire your doctor
    and get someone new
    But listen to your pain
    before you let them get to you...

    listen to your pain... ouch.... ouch...

    Fire your doctor
    and get someone new
    But listen to your pain
    before you let them... get to you...


    ---------------------------------------------------


    Listen To Your Heart

    I know there's something in the wake of your smile
    I get a notion from the look in your eyes, yeah
    you've built a love but that love falls apart
    your little piece of heaven turns too dark

    listen to your heart
    when he's calling for you
    listen to your heart
    there's nothing else you can do
    I don't know where you're going
    and I don't know why
    but listen to your heart
    before you tell him goodbye

    sometimes you wonder if this fight is worthwhile
    the precious moments are all lost in the tide, yeah
    they're swept away and nothing is what is seems
    the feeling of belonging to your dreams

    listen to your heart
    when he's calling for you
    listen to your heart
    there's nothing else you can do
    I don't know where you're going
    and I don't know why
    but listen to your heart
    before you tell him goodbye

    and there are voices
    that want to be heard
    so much to mention
    but you can't find the words
    the scent of magic
    the beauty that's been
    when love was wilder than the wind

    listen to your heart
    when he's calling for you
    listen to your heart
    there's nothing else you can do
    I don't know where you're going
    and I don't know why
    but listen to your heart
    before you tell him goodbye

    Listen to your heart....mm..mmm

    I don't know where you're going
    and I don't know why
    but listen to your heart
    before you tell him goodbye

  7. 4everkid

    4everkid New Member

    I think everyone is familiar with this 60's tv theme song:


    The Ballad of the Fibromyalgiabilly


    Come and listen to my story bout a gal named Kid
    A poor young mother with a quarter dozen kids
    One fine mornin 20 years ago today
    She woke up struck with Fi-bro-my-al-gee-ay

    Pain that is, body-wide agony

    Well the first thing ye know ol' Kid's a poppin pills
    Twenty years a poppin and they aint cured her still!
    They said, "Hey Kid, you don't look so sick to me."
    So I rammed em with my truck - told em "Now you feel like me!"

    Pain that is, invisible agony

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Well now it's time to say goodbye to my agility
    My funnin days are over, my wheelchair's on layaway
    Yer all invited over seven weeks from Saturday
    to kick back in the Lazy Boy and slather on Ben Gay!

    Sit a spell.
    Take yer shoes off!
    Y'all kick back now hear?



    [This Message was Edited on 03/29/2008]
  8. kholmes

    kholmes New Member


    Lying in bed, it ain’t no fun
    I fought CFS and CFS won (twice)
    Now I need money cause I have none
    I fought CFS and CFS won.
    I fought CFS and CFS won.

    I miss my life and it feels so bad
    Guess my race is run
    It was the best life that I’ve ever had
    I fought CFS and CFS won.

    My limbs they feel like they weigh a ton,
    I fought CFS and CFS won
    I lost my health and I lost my fun
    I fought CFS and CFS won.

    When I overdo, it feels so bad
    Guess my race is run,
    Sometimes I feel that I’ve been had
    I fought CFS and CFS won. (repeat)


    Ha, fun post, Fight!
  9. fight4acure

    fight4acure Member

    Such creative minds on here! Hope it helps the stress of this illness and pain and fatigue!

    Hugs

    :)
  10. victoria

    victoria New Member

    you all are so good with words!!!! Thanks for the laughs, always needed!

    Keep on keepin' on!

    Victoria