Discussion in 'Fibromyalgia Main Forum' started by amberbee, Oct 11, 2005.

  1. amberbee

    amberbee New Member

    I noticed recently that some of you have an interest in poetry as i do myself, so i thought i would let you read one of the poems that i have had published. Enjoy!!!


    For every waking moment
    And every waking hour
    Its always on my mind
    Burning with desire.
    A passion deep within me
    Eating me alive
    Temptation getting stronger
    Emotions running wild.
    Whatever could it be
    To make me crave so much
    To make my body stand on end
    With every sensuous touch.
    But I'll give in to temptation
    As it's all I really know
    For that big bun with cream on top
    I'll eat it in one go!.

    I am working on one at the moment to describe how fibromyalgia has affected me, so keep a look out and let me know what you think. AMBERBEE XXX
  2. Rosiebud

    Rosiebud New Member

    very much.

    Like Hangin, it fits me to a T.

  3. shelbo

    shelbo New Member

    Very good! Very cleverly written!
    Love Shelbo :)
  4. Sheila1366

    Sheila1366 New Member

    I love the way it starts out so passionate and then ends with a nice tasty treat.I might try my hand at writing again.Keep the poems coming.I look forward to the one about FM.Now that is a poem that needs to be written.

  5. LollieBoo

    LollieBoo New Member

    Why don't you join us over on the Poet's heart thread- we can all be in one place and I'll know for sure where to look for the next!

  6. angeleyes3815

    angeleyes3815 New Member

    I think your poem is great. I love to write poems also but never done anything with them so good for you.
    I would love to read the one about Fibro can't wait.

  7. angeleyes3815

    angeleyes3815 New Member

    Hi just want to know how do i find the poet's heart thread?
    If you can help i would be greatful.

    Thank You Angeleyes
  8. orachel

    orachel New Member

    That was fantastic! Thanks so much!


    PS...we also have a poetry thread on here....that's where many of us share our work (ok..their work....my doodles! LOL). Go check it out and put yours among the others so it doesn't get missed by any of our resident poetry lovers!
  9. LittleBluestem

    LittleBluestem New Member

    I am generally more of a poetry reader than a poetry writer. I did write one poem recently that got a good reception, not only from my friends, but from one person who is usually very critical. I have wondered if I could get it published, but don't have the faintest idea how to go about it.
  10. LittleBluestem

    LittleBluestem New Member

    Guess I should had read that entire thread before asking. Thanks for the redirect.

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